User blog:HermesDude/Some Changes to The One with Everything

So I was trying to go to sleep last night. And when I couldn't I kept thinking of things I should have added to the beginning of The One with Everything. And now I've decided that I'm going to rewrite some parts in the beginning. When I finish rewriting a chapter I shall write a blog to tell you all or just comment on the page. But for now it will be editted in a lot of places. I know that you might not want to wait but just remember, if you wait the story will be better once you read the finished product.