Talk:Men of the Day/@comment-5651348-20140924113623

Constructive Criticism time! (Hold onto yer butts, guise!):

I would write the chapters to be longer, and feel like an actual novel, maybe. You can read a chapter in a pretty quick manner. I would also use some stronger and more describing words, like turning "good" into "heroic" or something like that.

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