User blog comment:Nults McKagan/Corvus Constitution Draft/@comment-4958180-20150310034719


 * 1) Write it less gamey, and use more formal terms.
 * 2) Wipe the entire dereliction section or change it heavily.
 * 3) Switch the A's, B's, etc. with Sections.
 * 4) There should be a limit to property, especially with the dereliction part intact.
 * 5) Address government - either ministry or parliament with their respect roles, what powers they hold, checks & balances, and how they are instituted (either election, appointing, etc.) Since it shouldn't be an Absolute Monarchy with the fancy name of "Constitutional Monarchy."
 * 6) Add the right of religion, trial by jury, bear arms, speech, assembly, press, petition, equal justice, private property, no military quartering, living (person can live or travel anywhere in Corvus), occupation (work at any selected profession as long as its employment requirements are met), marriage and family, and education. (If not added already)
 * 7) Specify that judges cannot be of Royal Blood.
 * 8) State the process of selecting a jury and its foreman. The duties of the jury should also be detailed.
 * 9) "The Monarch... establish[es] and deal[s] with all diplomatic relations of the state." <- Wipe this in the case of a Minister of State. Which shall hold the power of being diplomat. The only exception is when the leader of another CivState requests an audience with Corvus in which case the King will meet instead of the respective Minister, and vice versa.
 * 10) The Monarch should not be judge (per suggestion #7), instead it should be handled by the Minister of Justice, or the Chief Justice (however our Government will be set up). The reason being that royalty is too high of an office for the position of Judge.

'Constitutional Convention for the win. '