Talk:The Mystery of The Stolen Design/@comment-4087774-20110626033227

i can see jack is an um... how do i say a person with low social experience, gets to the point quickly and likes sortly wenches and is an alchoholic. he needs to be described as a man whom is slightly overweight with some facial hair and mutton chops. edgar is apparently slightly wealthy and he needs to be dresed accordingly perhaps some "courting" for the future?