Talk:The Goldvane Trilogy Book 1: A Pirate Captain's Journey/@comment-3242795-20110219011309/@comment-2084412-20110219011617

It gets better in the next chapter. I'm sorry if you dislike my grammer. I try to put a good story together and don't have any time to fix mistakes. I started this a long time ago and am trying to improve. It's too hard to fix anything since it's so long. If you don't like it, don't read it.