User blog:Jim Logan/The real-life Biography of Jim Logan

I have decided to reqrite the real-life book The Biography of Jim Logan and ill put a chapter or 2 so you guys can review it and tell me if it needs work but mainly im just adding the Super Pirate, Im adding Victor as more of a main character and a few other people.

Chapter 27:The Invasion Of Port Royal
As Jim looked around to see Roger's skeleton army overtake the pirates, Jim only could watch in horror as his friend Captain Charles bled on the ground like a split fried egg, And as hard as Jim could fight the pure exaustion from the battle wore him out so much as he could barley stand alone, Jim would then pass out from the lack of energy. Jim would open his eyes to see Roger about to kill Jack Sparrow, Jim would shout "NOOOOOOOOO!" Jim's dirty blonde hair would then turn gold and stand up straight, his blue eyes would then turn green and Jim would unload on Jolly Roger and severly injure his enemy until Jim took out his pistol and shouted "YOU ARE A FOOL FOR UNDERESTIMATING ME!" He fired the shot and Roger would order a retreat, and as the pirates celebrated, Jim passed out from the energy he used.