User:Jack Pistol/MoreDrafts

TBC
Chapter 1

"Anthony, yer grip is not nearly strong enough. Hold yer sword tighter when ye swing or block with it," said a boy about 15 seasons old who was sparring with his brother in a field next to a small farmhouse.

"Easy for you, you're two seasons my senior. I have only been living in King George's country for 13 years of my life now," replied the younger brother, Anthony.

( just a reminder for me for when i do write this )