Talk:E3(Jim Logan's Story)/@comment-3060460-20120118012656

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"As she took more of 'The Liquid Dark Side' she could only think of how sweet the necture of great power, it tasted like sweet honey. Before she could drink down the goblet of the liquid dark side, she felt the presence of someone she was very close to, someone who she could trust with anything But she left another person, someone she didnt seem to know, she was angry at her father for dating someone, but was happy to see that he was out of this usual depressed funk. Before her father and his mistress could walk into the room she hid the liquid dark side in her secret box under the floor."

Can someone give me an opinion?